tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post2008129127162563437..comments2024-03-28T00:15:05.437-07:00Comments on j. rose allister: An Acolyte's Warning -Snippet SundayJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-21932758563070870162016-06-23T12:52:51.107-07:002016-06-23T12:52:51.107-07:00The wheat must contain godly gluten! Ha ha, couldn...The wheat must contain godly gluten! Ha ha, couldn't resist. Great snippet!<br /><br />~Joyce ScarbroughThe Belle in Bluehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16368021976814668783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-82956117267227503502016-06-21T20:06:32.935-07:002016-06-21T20:06:32.935-07:00I hope Shango gets to say "I told you so.&quo...I hope Shango gets to say "I told you so." P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-6239992712600258562016-06-21T05:24:00.087-07:002016-06-21T05:24:00.087-07:00Well created dialogue.Well created dialogue.Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-45691776246620265772016-06-20T09:13:53.542-07:002016-06-20T09:13:53.542-07:00Ah the frailties of humanity...nothing like realis...Ah the frailties of humanity...nothing like realistic character flaws. Great snippet!Elizabeth Alsobrookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18239143833626955490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-61017409129498299362016-06-19T23:37:31.494-07:002016-06-19T23:37:31.494-07:00That's a good point! And hey, what fun would f...That's a good point! And hey, what fun would fiction be if we couldn't push our heroes into something uncharacteristic? Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-85197112802124885562016-06-19T23:36:56.943-07:002016-06-19T23:36:56.943-07:00I actually started itching while writing this scen...I actually started itching while writing this scene! LOLJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-79906911049484830542016-06-19T23:36:32.233-07:002016-06-19T23:36:32.233-07:00Truer words, my friend. Truer words...Truer words, my friend. Truer words...Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-90376413010204025662016-06-19T23:36:09.690-07:002016-06-19T23:36:09.690-07:00Let's hope we don't have to deal with Snif...Let's hope we don't have to deal with Sniffy McShango much longer. :)Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-29014545801215321202016-06-19T16:55:14.278-07:002016-06-19T16:55:14.278-07:00Sometimes all the warnings in the world don't ...Sometimes all the warnings in the world don't do you any good. Especially when you can't imagine doing something out of character... until circumstances force you into it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-37363221481070765342016-06-19T13:10:35.161-07:002016-06-19T13:10:35.161-07:00Oh, I so feel Shango and his allergies. *sniffle*...Oh, I so feel Shango and his allergies. *sniffle* Great snippet!Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-44373449327943016062016-06-19T11:44:49.077-07:002016-06-19T11:44:49.077-07:00There are none so deaf as those who will not liste...There are none so deaf as those who will not listen.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-90509644374845491432016-06-19T10:26:52.444-07:002016-06-19T10:26:52.444-07:00Shango sounds like a nuisance. Nice touch that he ...Shango sounds like a nuisance. Nice touch that he has all those allergies! Enjoyed the snippet...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-36510028411593204802016-06-19T09:44:30.411-07:002016-06-19T09:44:30.411-07:00Bahahaha seriously! I guess even sacred wheat in t...Bahahaha seriously! I guess even sacred wheat in the realm of the gods isn't immune to allergy season!Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-29627368766317795422016-06-19T09:43:47.436-07:002016-06-19T09:43:47.436-07:00I'm with you there...he'd better tread lig...I'm with you there...he'd better tread lightly!Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-30484294278697271072016-06-19T09:43:26.360-07:002016-06-19T09:43:26.360-07:00Thank you for that feedback!Thank you for that feedback!Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-12932693156942940662016-06-19T09:42:56.388-07:002016-06-19T09:42:56.388-07:00Muwahahaha, when you can surprise a deity, it'...Muwahahaha, when you can surprise a deity, it's been a good day. lol.Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-3889833546902809762016-06-19T09:42:24.644-07:002016-06-19T09:42:24.644-07:00Thank you so much!Thank you so much!Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-31981554142105179952016-06-19T07:53:57.472-07:002016-06-19T07:53:57.472-07:00Such great world-building woven throughout the con...Such great world-building woven throughout the conversation. I can relate to Shango's allergies. Damn human ailments. :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-68975599467967057552016-06-19T07:35:41.846-07:002016-06-19T07:35:41.846-07:00He sounds like a very dedicated acolyte, but may b...He sounds like a very dedicated acolyte, but may be overstepping his bounds. I guess we'll see if he is being over protective or not. Great snippet!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-87088739532528093082016-06-19T06:12:09.145-07:002016-06-19T06:12:09.145-07:00A very natural sounding dialogue. Well done!A very natural sounding dialogue. Well done!HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-53672248418261124562016-06-19T04:43:21.521-07:002016-06-19T04:43:21.521-07:00Sounds like Feillor doesn't know what he's...Sounds like Feillor doesn't know what he's about to experience. Great snippet! :)Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-88425073988731792512016-06-19T00:06:35.523-07:002016-06-19T00:06:35.523-07:00I just love this premise, Rose.
I am enjoying watc...I just love this premise, Rose.<br />I am enjoying watching how you unfold it.Kim Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08556808413747062433noreply@blogger.com