tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post5803689533040238909..comments2024-03-28T23:14:37.321-07:00Comments on j. rose allister: A Bittersweet Reunion -8 Sunday NaNo Week 1Jhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-88221545700267931982013-11-03T13:22:29.936-08:002013-11-03T13:22:29.936-08:00Woah. So intense! I love it!Woah. So intense! I love it!Sarah Casshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03299866797067130767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-66814901246909151512013-11-03T10:05:57.880-08:002013-11-03T10:05:57.880-08:00Thank you for that feedback! Definitely an emotion...Thank you for that feedback! Definitely an emotional past between bro and sis. :)Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-43649559614799966082013-11-03T10:05:18.063-08:002013-11-03T10:05:18.063-08:00I appreciate that! Since this is chapter 1, suckin...I appreciate that! Since this is chapter 1, sucking in is definitely a goal LOLJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-67545782420135412682013-11-03T10:04:28.296-08:002013-11-03T10:04:28.296-08:00Thanks! I'm glad it comes off as tense as the ...Thanks! I'm glad it comes off as tense as the moment required.Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-2771385695817396032013-11-03T09:54:41.807-08:002013-11-03T09:54:41.807-08:00Very intense conversation, hints at so much in the...Very intense conversation, hints at so much in the past...will be interesting to see what happens next. Excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-47633303533039878912013-11-03T07:42:14.112-08:002013-11-03T07:42:14.112-08:00Very nice. You've sucked me in to this exchan...Very nice. You've sucked me in to this exchange. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-1888549457988661842013-11-03T06:40:37.458-08:002013-11-03T06:40:37.458-08:00I really like it so far. The exchange is tense for...I really like it so far. The exchange is tense for all the right reasons. The conflict seems organic, not manufactured. Great job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551959202889083501noreply@blogger.com