tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post2332636606487060724..comments2024-03-28T00:15:05.437-07:00Comments on j. rose allister: An Annoying Little Curse-Snippet SundayJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-36186713560634871462013-04-01T00:16:43.667-07:002013-04-01T00:16:43.667-07:00Oh snap! He wasn't expecting that! Ha!Nice qui...Oh snap! He wasn't expecting that! Ha!Nice quick paced dialogue there. HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-46503847107501312582013-03-31T15:00:09.501-07:002013-03-31T15:00:09.501-07:00Fantastic tension! Love that he had that 'litt...Fantastic tension! Love that he had that 'little curse lifted'!! Things are gonna heat up! Great 8! :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08920349957061612653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-24961900022400844612013-03-31T11:40:20.283-07:002013-03-31T11:40:20.283-07:00Thanks for noticing the typo...the line had origin...Thanks for noticing the typo...the line had originally been written so that "heard" was the correct word. ::quick edit:: ;)Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-1758067896688765042013-03-31T09:39:08.126-07:002013-03-31T09:39:08.126-07:00Love the tension and spark between them. Great job...Love the tension and spark between them. Great job!Vivien Deanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15510934097238428891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-83003236199754977972013-03-31T08:43:45.332-07:002013-03-31T08:43:45.332-07:00Tension filled scene. I love her last line. I woul...Tension filled scene. I love her last line. I would love to know his response. :)Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-7461842468886446072013-03-31T07:19:22.507-07:002013-03-31T07:19:22.507-07:00A very tense moment! A very tense moment! Joanne Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17708364499624604625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-48755371588201595382013-03-31T06:00:11.852-07:002013-03-31T06:00:11.852-07:00“Did you heard the part where I went to a coven an...“Did you heard the part where I went to a coven and had that annoying little curse lifted?” Nice last line! ("d" on "heard" was a typo, no doubt)<br /><br />Good, snappy dialogue. Great atmosphere coming through the words. :-)<br /><br />Happy Easter :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.com