tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post2674260133250922638..comments2024-03-28T23:14:37.321-07:00Comments on j. rose allister: What a Man Ought to Do-Snippet SundayJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-63771830914200865562013-05-06T13:28:44.712-07:002013-05-06T13:28:44.712-07:00Oh wow. I can just HEAR him, complete with a bit o...Oh wow. I can just HEAR him, complete with a bit of a country twang. (I have no idea if you intended him to have a twang, but I hear one when I read this.)And I love his straight to the point attitude, too.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17483358896129416234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-18164712771743083992013-05-06T11:12:43.485-07:002013-05-06T11:12:43.485-07:00Man, I could hear his voice in my head, intonation...Man, I could hear his voice in my head, intonation and all. Loved his lines! Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-85947762702898424422013-05-05T19:05:54.668-07:002013-05-05T19:05:54.668-07:00Totally sweet. I'm swooning here.Totally sweet. I'm swooning here. Kayci Morganhttp://kaycimorgan.weebly.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-36881344504803602972013-05-05T16:37:14.242-07:002013-05-05T16:37:14.242-07:00I love the dialogue. Great snippet!I love the dialogue. Great snippet!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-736658692788316522013-05-05T15:46:43.264-07:002013-05-05T15:46:43.264-07:00Swoon.Swoon.Kylie Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12266641348443886411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-60591976346121220512013-05-05T14:26:30.962-07:002013-05-05T14:26:30.962-07:00Oh my! I love him already. Great snippet! Can'...Oh my! I love him already. Great snippet! Can't wait for more. :)A.S. Fenichelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15188528705441184803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-5873745476719402032013-05-05T12:54:25.572-07:002013-05-05T12:54:25.572-07:00Seems like a nice guy and you've given his voi...Seems like a nice guy and you've given his voice a lot of character. One small suggestion: You use both "gaze" and "gazed" in the same sentence. Perhaps substituting "staring" for the second one would sound a little better? Just an idea. Hope you don't mind. Nice to meet you! :-)Debbie D. https://www.blogger.com/profile/13153118405565035071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-82228404293744310792013-05-05T12:13:22.877-07:002013-05-05T12:13:22.877-07:00Well all right then! I liked him, enjoyed the &quo...Well all right then! I liked him, enjoyed the "tone" of his dialog...terrific snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-70153851747416759122013-05-05T11:37:09.341-07:002013-05-05T11:37:09.341-07:00Ooh, i love the way his way of speaking comes acro...Ooh, i love the way his way of speaking comes across.Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02995447825109758826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-84127014661047187892013-05-05T11:04:36.038-07:002013-05-05T11:04:36.038-07:00Great snippet - absolutely love the guys last two ...Great snippet - absolutely love the guys last two sentences -- great lines.Susan Stuckeyhttp://susan-stuckey.storytellersinn.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-37564025800629893092013-05-05T10:52:52.911-07:002013-05-05T10:52:52.911-07:00I love this guy already! I cold hear his rugged vo...I love this guy already! I cold hear his rugged voice. Perfect. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-26795954299804309482013-05-05T07:32:17.100-07:002013-05-05T07:32:17.100-07:00I love the great chemistry and emotion you put int...I love the great chemistry and emotion you put into these characters!Laurenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07986129906420811246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-26943985848066198292013-05-05T07:06:33.481-07:002013-05-05T07:06:33.481-07:00That's super sweet. Love it.That's super sweet. Love it.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-74023215417406206202013-05-05T05:49:46.728-07:002013-05-05T05:49:46.728-07:00Oh, sweet. Men who do what they ought to do are a ...Oh, sweet. Men who do what they ought to do are a real turn on, IMHO>India Mastershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17655550748159559852noreply@blogger.com