tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post7347269704139727856..comments2024-03-28T00:15:05.437-07:00Comments on j. rose allister: Roller Coaster Emotions-Six Sentence SundayJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-10502105531993412662011-03-14T07:27:15.386-07:002011-03-14T07:27:15.386-07:00Very nice. Love how you use the little details to ...Very nice. Love how you use the little details to paint the scene.Marie Deeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02227521965829153174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-19481332749881806582011-03-14T06:06:40.979-07:002011-03-14T06:06:40.979-07:00I hope she tells him yes. Great six.I hope she tells him yes. Great six.Alyssa Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08388521969658890281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-30390284388299809412011-03-14T02:59:25.086-07:002011-03-14T02:59:25.086-07:00I think he's made a good start! :)I think he's made a good start! :)Pip Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02141472079095619099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-12315210926682843312011-03-13T18:54:26.949-07:002011-03-13T18:54:26.949-07:00Start over? I think he just needs to keep going. S...Start over? I think he just needs to keep going. Sounds like he's on a roll to me.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12742618211008888625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-42287782264776117082011-03-13T18:04:36.571-07:002011-03-13T18:04:36.571-07:00A great excerpt! I hope she says yes and I hope yo...A great excerpt! I hope she says yes and I hope you'll share the next six in a week.Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-36869321705205078662011-03-13T16:41:04.708-07:002011-03-13T16:41:04.708-07:00excellent - my favorite so far :)excellent - my favorite so far :)Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10623218050136222269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-81507515702806654342011-03-13T16:38:42.742-07:002011-03-13T16:38:42.742-07:00Yes! (at least I'd want to say that to him) I ...Yes! (at least I'd want to say that to him) I Love intensity in a man.<br />Christine London<br />www.christinelondon.comChristine Londonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16241115024592807621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-59978914093188984772011-03-13T13:57:46.770-07:002011-03-13T13:57:46.770-07:00Great six. I love the tension and his unexpected ...Great six. I love the tension and his unexpected question. Good jobJayel Kayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16895398236919824214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-60182180035315140002011-03-13T13:05:27.553-07:002011-03-13T13:05:27.553-07:00Provocative situation - and a rgeat six.Provocative situation - and a rgeat six.Lauri J Owenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11915434024514573480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-48105364971842160382011-03-13T12:23:26.931-07:002011-03-13T12:23:26.931-07:00A chance to start over? Hope they are able to make...A chance to start over? Hope they are able to make it work.Emily Calehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02565254147540303402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-19902978020462666822011-03-13T12:03:08.130-07:002011-03-13T12:03:08.130-07:00Amazing buildup -- and I love how the last line br...Amazing buildup -- and I love how the last line broke the tension and left the reader wanting more!Christinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00793641285113529188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-55529400029923136922011-03-13T11:49:39.437-07:002011-03-13T11:49:39.437-07:00Wow! Very intense!Wow! Very intense!Lisa Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04249215936412244450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-91092782560570598402011-03-13T11:44:20.516-07:002011-03-13T11:44:20.516-07:00Beauticful building of sexual tension.Beauticful building of sexual tension.Lindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07716003019499843582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-42471121772691587252011-03-13T10:57:20.092-07:002011-03-13T10:57:20.092-07:00Sweet and sexy ;)Sweet and sexy ;)Staceyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17349135364871429981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-59115814200710164032011-03-13T09:59:02.810-07:002011-03-13T09:59:02.810-07:00starting over can be good....starting over can be good....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-46488238472460879682011-03-13T09:44:03.927-07:002011-03-13T09:44:03.927-07:00I love your descriptive ability!I love your descriptive ability!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-24254417112664749052011-03-13T09:33:57.883-07:002011-03-13T09:33:57.883-07:00Love the last line!!Love the last line!!Patricia Prestonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04538067779006621088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-38841939065990030572011-03-13T08:00:20.309-07:002011-03-13T08:00:20.309-07:00"Can we start now, period?" <--Would ..."Can we start now, period?" <--Would be my reply >:DD. F. Kriegerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17928379477537074214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-88265185352345055992011-03-13T07:57:28.146-07:002011-03-13T07:57:28.146-07:00Very nice. Great tension.Very nice. Great tension.Jessicahttp://www.jessicamorsestories.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-84900644860772675782011-03-13T07:36:09.590-07:002011-03-13T07:36:09.590-07:00Very sensual. As romance should beVery sensual. As romance should beViviane Brentanoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02808392383255590249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-50515653219373287742011-03-13T07:32:17.844-07:002011-03-13T07:32:17.844-07:00Mmm... delicious! :)Mmm... delicious! :)Lucy Felthousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02164383675268417252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-10927175245207186822011-03-13T07:04:55.796-07:002011-03-13T07:04:55.796-07:00I like how his dialogue at the end breaks the tens...I like how his dialogue at the end breaks the tension too!Laura Kayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06405372483109781087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-52671205815890651442011-03-13T06:27:25.007-07:002011-03-13T06:27:25.007-07:00Can she say yes?Can she say yes?Rebecca Roycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14556741805325106199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-21557069025408678512011-03-13T06:26:24.763-07:002011-03-13T06:26:24.763-07:00I hope she says yes!
Great snippet :-)I hope she says yes! <br />Great snippet :-)Liia Ann Whitehttp://www.liia-ann.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-23793219326811712962011-03-13T05:44:26.679-07:002011-03-13T05:44:26.679-07:00Yes, she has to say "yes" because I want...Yes, she has to say "yes" because I want more.<br /><br />Great six!<br /><br />gemGem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.com