tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post8678229749983137890..comments2024-03-28T23:14:37.321-07:00Comments on j. rose allister: NaNo 2015: Snippet Sunday Edition #2Jhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-67720505672135874622015-11-16T13:30:47.952-08:002015-11-16T13:30:47.952-08:00Thank you so much!Thank you so much!Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-45274735826316708812015-11-16T13:30:32.932-08:002015-11-16T13:30:32.932-08:00Yes, I do believe we're kindred spirits there!...Yes, I do believe we're kindred spirits there! Thanks for coming by. :)Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-86777054878102121672015-11-16T13:27:58.742-08:002015-11-16T13:27:58.742-08:00LOL yes, a bit of common sense popped in after his...LOL yes, a bit of common sense popped in after his little prank. Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-5465636098769603432015-11-16T13:27:09.708-08:002015-11-16T13:27:09.708-08:00Muwahahaha, yes he is. Will his tricks backfire on...Muwahahaha, yes he is. Will his tricks backfire on him? :)Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-28247656259777002142015-11-16T13:26:32.937-08:002015-11-16T13:26:32.937-08:00Thanks for that feedback!Thanks for that feedback!Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-47347451986271694962015-11-16T13:25:58.590-08:002015-11-16T13:25:58.590-08:00Very true! Though in the modern day, with gods who...Very true! Though in the modern day, with gods who cannot quite pass for human, it makes for an interesting challenge.Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-79122571930698589112015-11-16T13:25:08.275-08:002015-11-16T13:25:08.275-08:00Thank you! Yes, I do believe her effect may linger...Thank you! Yes, I do believe her effect may linger with him a while...Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-883279658675463062015-11-16T11:25:59.076-08:002015-11-16T11:25:59.076-08:00Very nice snippet. I am intrigued to read more!Very nice snippet. I am intrigued to read more!Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18021898381530493048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-77736193817988953942015-11-16T10:35:40.987-08:002015-11-16T10:35:40.987-08:00How interesting! I love looking into the mindset ...How interesting! I love looking into the mindset of people who just don't think like the rest of us mere mortals. Very intriguing! Thanks so much for sharing!Amalie Cantorhttp://daughterofkieran.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-66786372110340289252015-11-15T21:02:45.628-08:002015-11-15T21:02:45.628-08:00At least he has the decency to feel a little bit a...At least he has the decency to feel a little bit ashamed of his prank. And he's worried about what sort of weapon she might have hidden in the tent. There seems to be hope for this immortal.Alexis Duranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15582838606796213690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-82105241168650429592015-11-15T18:56:54.763-08:002015-11-15T18:56:54.763-08:00Oh, you've done an excellent job of writing hi...Oh, you've done an excellent job of writing his thoughts and his "semi-logic". He's selfishly behaving just like the gods of old. ;-) Good snippet, Rose! Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-9269698492050418602015-11-15T16:32:58.412-08:002015-11-15T16:32:58.412-08:00I like that last line! That really hit it home for...I like that last line! That really hit it home for me.Jessehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00111065759885901547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-80790108186294338962015-11-15T16:08:16.746-08:002015-11-15T16:08:16.746-08:00All the old gods interacted with mortals, especial...All the old gods interacted with mortals, especially beautiful female ones. Can't wait to see what happens next.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-75134784695558294072015-11-15T13:34:12.724-08:002015-11-15T13:34:12.724-08:00Ha! Even an immortal god can't resist a mortal...Ha! Even an immortal god can't resist a mortal female. Really enjoyed his playful POV. :)Lorien Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299242632625658988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-65060010606846588782015-11-15T13:20:20.099-08:002015-11-15T13:20:20.099-08:00Good call! They are indeed, and his mother especia...Good call! They are indeed, and his mother especially was a trickster so some of it has rubbed off. Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-21318403909243862032015-11-15T13:19:34.027-08:002015-11-15T13:19:34.027-08:00Welll he is actually referring to a scene that too...Welll he is actually referring to a scene that took place earlier, where she unwittingly blundered into this hunt and scared off the game. But LOL!Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-291130638461960602015-11-15T12:03:36.099-08:002015-11-15T12:03:36.099-08:00Well, the old gods re known to be mischievous and ...Well, the old gods re known to be mischievous and have poor impulse control, so this guy would fit right in. From the description of your capable heroine, I think she can handle him - great snippet.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-37278006200155368492015-11-15T12:03:08.401-08:002015-11-15T12:03:08.401-08:00That's hardly her fault, that he spied on her ...That's hardly her fault, that he spied on her and was distracted! Sheesh.<br /><br />Way to go on NaNo! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-86749167279365271822015-11-15T11:51:26.768-08:002015-11-15T11:51:26.768-08:00LOL Thank you! I think there are plenty in store f...LOL Thank you! I think there are plenty in store for these two. :)Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7479970236513469263.post-6417941379306319452015-11-15T06:05:54.530-08:002015-11-15T06:05:54.530-08:00Hilarious! He plans to exact payment for losing hi...Hilarious! He plans to exact payment for losing his kill, indeed. My guess is he's got something else coming his way. Good wrighting!Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.com