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Sunday, March 20, 2011

You Think I'm Handsome?-Six Sentence Sunday

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On select Sundays I'll be sharing a six-sentence excerpt from one of my works in progress, as part of Six Sentence Sunday.

This six is from ONCE EVERY SPRING, a fun urban fantasy WiP I'm getting ready to submit.

“I'm Adam, by the way--and you are?”
Dana burst out laughing, but he looked less than amused.
“Is something funny?” he asked.
“I've cracked my block enough to teleport myself to Dreamsville with a handsome guy, and then I find out I've landed in the garden of Eden with none other than Adam himself. What's not funny about that?”
“You think I'm handsome?” he asked, his grin tingling along all new nerve bundles in her spine.



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J. Rose Allister is the author of more than twenty-five books, primarily romance and erotic romance. A former editor and submissions director, she now works as a mild-mannered hospital secretary by day, naughty writer by night. Connect with her on Twitter or Goodreads. She loves talking to people.

18 comments:

  1. LOL. Fun six! Love that he gets 'stuck' on the handsome part.

    ~Sarah

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  2. Love the effect that his grin has on her!

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  3. Love this six - looks like fun ahead. :)

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  4. Oh wow. I absolutely loved those six.

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  5. I sense discord in paradise. This sounds like fun.

    Great six!

    gem

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  6. Sounds fun! I hope you'll share more from this WIP.

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  7. lol! I like his confusion - but why Adam? Is he naked? (this is important information!!!)

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  8. Heh, I like how he fixes on her thinking he's handsome.

    Nice six :)

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  9. LOL Thanks all! "Why Adam, is he naked?" heh heh...

    definitely more coming from this wip next week.

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  10. Men! They always shut down after hearing a compliment!

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  11. That's a totally unique plot idea. How interesting! I like your pacing, it is really enjoyable to read.

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