On select Sundays I'll be sharing a six-sentence excerpt from one of my works in progress, as part of Six Sentence Sunday.
This six is from ONCE EVERY SPRING, a fun urban fantasy WiP I'm getting ready to submit.
“I'm Adam, by the way--and you are?”
Dana burst out laughing, but he looked less than amused.
“Is something funny?” he asked.
“I've cracked my block enough to teleport myself to Dreamsville with a handsome guy, and then I find out I've landed in the garden of Eden with none other than Adam himself. What's not funny about that?”
“You think I'm handsome?” he asked, his grin tingling along all new nerve bundles in her spine.
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LOL. Fun six! Love that he gets 'stuck' on the handsome part.
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Very cute!
ReplyDeleteLove the effect that his grin has on her!
ReplyDeleteLove this six - looks like fun ahead. :)
ReplyDeleteOh wow. I absolutely loved those six.
ReplyDeleteI sense discord in paradise. This sounds like fun.
ReplyDeleteGreat six!
gem
Sounds fun! I hope you'll share more from this WIP.
ReplyDeletelol! I like his confusion - but why Adam? Is he naked? (this is important information!!!)
ReplyDeleteGreat humor there!
ReplyDeleteVery cute!
ReplyDeleteNice six!
ReplyDeleteHeh, I like how he fixes on her thinking he's handsome.
ReplyDeleteNice six :)
I love UF. Great six!
ReplyDeleteLOL Thanks all! "Why Adam, is he naked?" heh heh...
ReplyDeletedefinitely more coming from this wip next week.
Cute...love that last line!
ReplyDeleteMen! They always shut down after hearing a compliment!
ReplyDeleteLol! Really amusing. :)
ReplyDeleteThat's a totally unique plot idea. How interesting! I like your pacing, it is really enjoyable to read.
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