~~~~~On select Sundays I'll be sharing a six-sentence excerpt from one of my works in progress, as part of Six Sentence Sunday.
This six is the next snippet from ONCE EVERY SPRING, my "sweet" urban fantasy WiP.
Dana wants to know how a tree transported her to an alternate fantasy reality where just one other exists...
“There is more to it than just the trees.” Adam paused, as if he was about to impart a vital, verbose speech he'd been preparing for ages. “The jacaranda petals.”
She waited, frowning when he failed to reveal more. “What about the petals?”
He resumed walking, and she followed him up a small slope.
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I think I'd hit Adam for being so vague. Tell me more. Nice six!
ReplyDeleteI'm loving following this duo- she's always so inquisitive and he loves the way she questions him at every turn
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Yes, 'what about the petals?' tell us! lol. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteI'm definitely following the petal clue. Great snippet.
ReplyDeletelol! What a teaser!!
ReplyDeleteThis is very cinematic -- I can see the characters crossing the landscape and teasing out the facts.
ReplyDeleteI want to know more!
ReplyDeleteGood teaser! This has got to be serious if there's jewelry involved. After rereading last week's post, I'm definitely intrigued.
ReplyDeleteDying to know more about those petals!
ReplyDeleteSomebody give Adam a good slap upside the head.
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