~~Warning: adult language, mature themes~~
On Sundays, I share tidbits of my works in progress as part of Weekend Warrior’s 8-Sentence Sunday.
This week, I have a snippet from another short story that was rewritten for inclusion on Amazon. It's titled Spring Break Seduction, a super hot, super naughty erotica piece. Here's my snippet (edited to fit the 8-sentence format):
As I sat holding my cellphone while listening to my mother’s
moderately drunk, disjointed reply about termites and her having forgotten I
was coming home, movement outside the house next door caught my eye. There he
was, in the flesh and mowing the lawn. April had turned unseasonably hot, and
so had Billy Hunt.
As many times as I fantasized about the guy, I hadn’t truly remembered every nuance of the utter fucking sexuality that dripped off him like the sweat rivulets rolling down his bare, chiseled torso. His chestnut hair was longer than I remembered, and he tossed it out of his eyes with a boyish motion that dried every bit of saliva from my throat.
As many times as I fantasized about the guy, I hadn’t truly remembered every nuance of the utter fucking sexuality that dripped off him like the sweat rivulets rolling down his bare, chiseled torso. His chestnut hair was longer than I remembered, and he tossed it out of his eyes with a boyish motion that dried every bit of saliva from my throat.
To my simultaneous delight and terror, he shut down the
mower as soon as he saw me. The wide smile that always weakened my knees
appeared on his face, and before I even realized it, I’d opened the car door. My
mother was still babbling when I clicked off the cell phone.
So, what do you think?
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An erotic short story…
Jinger was supposed to spend Spring Break catching up on her
neglected studies. Instead, her visit home brings her naughtiest fantasies to
life—in the arms of Billy Hunt, her best friend’s father and the hottie next
door.
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Oh...my....yum...mee. ~wipes drool from her chin~ Yowza. I want me some of that.
ReplyDeleteOh boy, he sounds delicious! I can totally picture him in my mind. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteWhat do I think???? Yeah, Baby! Home run! There are so many great lines--I think my favorites are:
ReplyDelete...boyish motion that dried every bit of saliva from my throat.
To my simultaneous delight and terror, he shut down the mower as soon as he saw me.
"April had turned unseasonably hot, and so had Billy Hunt." Awesome! Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteWell, yay for reasons for attractive men to be shirtless!
ReplyDeleteOh yesssss, forget the cell phone and the termites and everything else! I totally approve :-) Great snippet, very hot.
ReplyDeleteLove the hair, love the way she turned off the cell phone...great 8!
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