It's Snippet Sunday, a Weekend Writing Warriors' blog hop!
My first snippet of the New Year! I'm trying something new for 2017: I'll be alternating snippets between this blog and over on the blog for my mainstream romance pen name. To kick things off, I thought I'd share a bit from Dominus: God of Yule in honor of its new cover and permafree status.
My first snippet of the New Year! I'm trying something new for 2017: I'll be alternating snippets between this blog and over on the blog for my mainstream romance pen name. To kick things off, I thought I'd share a bit from Dominus: God of Yule in honor of its new cover and permafree status.
Quick synopsis: Dominus, god of the
sabbat, has spent half a year preparing the latest light bearer for a ritual to
return Yule light to the world. Months of visiting Lorayna in secret, present
only in whispers, has sparked a yearning inside of him that he cannot shake.
Lorayna has felt herself drawn to the presence she has been unable
to resist. When she discovers her “holiday spirit” is in fact a sexy god, she’s
ready for whatever ritual he wants. When something goes wrong, however, Dominus
is forced to give into his urges before the Yule power consumes her. He will
defy his father, Herne, as well as his own calling to follow his heart and
prove to Lorayna that she was not just another ritual partner, and the ripples
of their passion would alter many sabbat unions to come.
For this week's snippet...
Keeping himself invisible, Dominus goes to Lorayna and prepares to engage Lorayna for the Yule ritual. He finds her in the bathroom and is mesmerized...
(Edited slightly for length/content)
He moved down the hall, following the aroma of spiced wassail along with Lorayna’s own sweet scent, to the bathroom. Lorayna, who was still fully clothed, was brushing out her long, dark hair. He came up behind her, his image in the mirror visible only to him. His own immortal light burned brighter these days, it seemed, or perhaps it was only by proximity to her. Either way, their auras shimmered like sparkling crystal in the looking glass.
Keeping himself invisible, Dominus goes to Lorayna and prepares to engage Lorayna for the Yule ritual. He finds her in the bathroom and is mesmerized...
(Edited slightly for length/content)
He moved down the hall, following the aroma of spiced wassail along with Lorayna’s own sweet scent, to the bathroom. Lorayna, who was still fully clothed, was brushing out her long, dark hair. He came up behind her, his image in the mirror visible only to him. His own immortal light burned brighter these days, it seemed, or perhaps it was only by proximity to her. Either way, their auras shimmered like sparkling crystal in the looking glass.
She paused, holding the
brush over her crown without stroking it, when he drew near. He was so close
now, closer than he should permit, close enough for her to feel that immortal
life energy pulsing off him. Close enough for him to feel her heat as well, and
he basked in the light she could no longer fully contain within her lush body.
Her hand slowly lowered to her side, and she was staring at herself while he
moved in closer still, smelling her hair, relishing in the feel of his body
responding to hers. But he did not touch her, for it was forbidden until the
bearer was ready.
...What do you think?
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Nothing like a rule to push passion over the edge. Excellent snippet, Rose
ReplyDeleteLOL how true! Thank you.
DeleteSo beautifully descriptive, I felt like i was right there with him.
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DeleteI agree with Christina. The description is beautiful. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteMy day=made. Thank you!
DeleteI think the bearer is ready. I know I am!! Very lush and sensual scene. Well done!
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DeleteHot and hotter. Wow what a snippet.
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DeleteI can feel his anxiousness. A wonderful snippet! :)
ReplyDeleteDefinitely anxious! Thank you.
DeleteInteresting story. Thanks for sharing.
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DeleteLove this situation. It's part threatening and part sensual.
ReplyDeleteLOL! Sounds like a lot of my relationships.
DeleteLove the excerpt, very visual and intense. Excellent!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
DeleteThat's a whole lot of heat and temptation... You just know something has to give.
ReplyDeleteHe's tormenting himself and I doubt it'll be longer before he gives in. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet full of intensity and temptation. It's almost like he's teasing the both of them, and that can be a dangerous thing.
ReplyDeleteGreat description. Very sensual. The way she paused makes me wonder if she feels his presence.
ReplyDeleteShe better get ready! Love the description here!
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