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Sunday, April 17, 2011

You Wished For Me?-Six Sentence Sunday

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On select Sundays I'll be sharing a six-sentence excerpt from one of my works in progress, as part of Six Sentence Sunday.

This six is the next snippet from ONCE EVERY SPRING, my "sweet" urban fantasy WiP. Picking up from where we left off last week...

Heat seared her cheeks. “Listen, I didn't have to bring you along for the ride, you know. Any more wisecracks and I’ll wish you right out of dreamland.”

This only steel-reinforced his devilish grin. “Is that how you think I got here? You wished for me?”



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J. Rose Allister is the author of more than twenty-five books, primarily romance and erotic romance. A former editor and submissions director, she now works as a mild-mannered hospital secretary by day, naughty writer by night. Connect with her on Twitter or Goodreads. She loves talking to people.

15 comments:

  1. Ohhh! That last line opens up all kinds of possibilities. Great dialogue!

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  2. I'm thinking if I could...I would wish for him too- great six

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  3. Busted!
    LOL
    I love this.
    Thanks for the show.

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  4. Great dialogue, and great teaser! Would love to read more.

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  5. I love the dialogue between these two!

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  6. How do I get wishes like that? LOL

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  7. She needs to be careful how she answers that. lol I love the dialogue between these two.

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  8. Wonderful dialogue. He sure knows how to read into what she's saying.

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  9. Nice. He's obviously going to give the heroine a run for her money.

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  10. Love the six. Lots of possibilities there

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  11. Makes me really curious about your world : )

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  12. This is a great excerpt! Playful and it leaves so many questions. I look forward to reading more. :)

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  13. Wishing up men is never a good thing. This six has definitely got my attention.

    ~ Renee

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