On select Sundays I'll be sharing a six-sentence excerpt from one of my works in progress, as part of Six Sentence Sunday.
This six is the next snippet from ONCE EVERY SPRING, my "sweet" urban fantasy WiP. Picking up from where we left off last week...
Heat seared her cheeks. “Listen, I didn't have to bring you along for the ride, you know. Any more wisecracks and I’ll wish you right out of dreamland.”
This only steel-reinforced his devilish grin. “Is that how you think I got here? You wished for me?”
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Ohhh! That last line opens up all kinds of possibilities. Great dialogue!
ReplyDeleteI'm thinking if I could...I would wish for him too- great six
ReplyDeleteBusted!
ReplyDeleteLOL
I love this.
Thanks for the show.
Great dialogue, and great teaser! Would love to read more.
ReplyDeleteI love the dialogue between these two!
ReplyDeleteHow do I get wishes like that? LOL
ReplyDeleteShe needs to be careful how she answers that. lol I love the dialogue between these two.
ReplyDeleteuhoh. cat's out of the bag!
ReplyDeleteWonderful dialogue. He sure knows how to read into what she's saying.
ReplyDeleteNice. He's obviously going to give the heroine a run for her money.
ReplyDeleteLove the six. Lots of possibilities there
ReplyDeleteMakes me really curious about your world : )
ReplyDeleteLove these characters!
ReplyDeleteThis is a great excerpt! Playful and it leaves so many questions. I look forward to reading more. :)
ReplyDeleteWishing up men is never a good thing. This six has definitely got my attention.
ReplyDelete~ Renee