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Sunday, April 10, 2011

It's My Hallucination-Six Sentence Sunday

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On select Sundays I'll be sharing a six-sentence excerpt from one of my works in progress, as part of Six Sentence Sunday.

This six is the next snippet from ONCE EVERY SPRING, my "sweet" urban fantasy WiP. Picking up from where we left off last week...


She stopped and heaved an irritated sigh. “I’m Dana--just Dana.”

“Nice to meet you. Any idea where you're going, just Dana?”

“It's my hallucination, so I figure whichever way I go must be right.”

His tone held more than a little amusement as he replied, “Interesting theory, but you might want to consider that if this is just a delusion, your best thinking landed you the starring role in a rather bizarre psychosis.”



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J. Rose Allister is the author of more than twenty-five books, primarily romance and erotic romance. A former editor and submissions director, she now works as a mild-mannered hospital secretary by day, naughty writer by night. Connect with her on Twitter or Goodreads. She loves talking to people.

21 comments:

  1. Oh J Rose...all this oozing sarcasm and humor....LOVE it
    Dawne P

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  2. A man and a woman, some spicy dialog in a spring setting. All in six great sentences. Well done!

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  3. LOL. Yeah, these two are made for each other. Love their interaction.

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  4. Great come back! Really loving these two!

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  5. Fabulous dialogue! Says so much about both of them. I look forward to reading more.

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  6. Great banter and chemistry, but also tension--bizarre psychosis can be damaging to your health! excellent hook into the rest of the story!

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  7. Hallucination? Then anything can happen! I wonder what will...

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  8. Fantastic. Love these six.
    *Snickers*

    "staring role in a rather bizarre psyshosis"

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  9. Good dialogue--I like her determination to keep as much control of the situation as she can.

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  10. Quirky sense of humor. I like it. :o)

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  11. Great six. I like the two of them!

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  12. Very interesting dialog. Great banter.

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  13. I'm in, please post more of this!

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  14. Why does she still think this is a delusion? Wish mine were so chatty. :-P

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  15. Very interesting six! Great stuff!

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