~~~~~On select Sundays I'll be sharing a six-sentence excerpt from one of my works in progress, as part of Six Sentence Sunday.
This six is the next snippet from ONCE EVERY SPRING, my "sweet" urban fantasy WiP. Picking up from where we left off last week...
She stopped and heaved an irritated sigh. “I’m Dana--just Dana.”
“Nice to meet you. Any idea where you're going, just Dana?”
“It's my hallucination, so I figure whichever way I go must be right.”
His tone held more than a little amusement as he replied, “Interesting theory, but you might want to consider that if this is just a delusion, your best thinking landed you the starring role in a rather bizarre psychosis.”
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Oh J Rose...all this oozing sarcasm and humor....LOVE it
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A man and a woman, some spicy dialog in a spring setting. All in six great sentences. Well done!
ReplyDeletelol loved your 6!
ReplyDeleteAwesome chemistry between them!
ReplyDeleteLOL. Yeah, these two are made for each other. Love their interaction.
ReplyDeleteGreat come back! Really loving these two!
ReplyDeleteFabulous dialogue! Says so much about both of them. I look forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteGreat banter and chemistry, but also tension--bizarre psychosis can be damaging to your health! excellent hook into the rest of the story!
ReplyDeletelove the humour and attitude
ReplyDeleteHallucination? Then anything can happen! I wonder what will...
ReplyDeleteFantastic. Love these six.
ReplyDelete*Snickers*
"staring role in a rather bizarre psyshosis"
Good dialogue--I like her determination to keep as much control of the situation as she can.
ReplyDeleteQuirky sense of humor. I like it. :o)
ReplyDeleteGreat six. I like the two of them!
ReplyDeleteWonderful six.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting dialog. Great banter.
ReplyDeleteI'm in, please post more of this!
ReplyDeleteLOL I loved this.
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha! great six!
ReplyDeleteWhy does she still think this is a delusion? Wish mine were so chatty. :-P
ReplyDeleteVery interesting six! Great stuff!
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