Sunday, September 6, 2015

# #8 Sunday # Post

Test of a Dominant -Snippet Sunday

~~Warning: Adult content~~

On Sundays, I share tidbits of my works in progress as part of Weekend Warrior’s 8-Sentence Sunday.  This week, I continue with my latest project, a bondage fantasy titled Bound to Her Master.

Last week, Ti-Hana, sex slave to the arising lordship himself, had her big moment being revealed to the crowd--although her attention was more focused on her Master. This week, we've moved a little ways forward, into Lord Stepanyan's viewpoint as he contemplates the even bigger moment that lies just ahead. 

Every nerve in Stepanyan’s body twinged with a tight alertness, as though he were preparing for battle with a Lyrian fire beast rather than simply audiencing his Mastery of a female. He had done so many times in the pleasure house, even once or twice at the open-air temple, and this occasion should be no different. Yet it was.
This was not only a test of a god’s skill in the Cerunnon ways, but a test of a ruler preparing to take his place on the high seat. A test of a Dominant who had tamed a ti hana—a truly "wild human"—in just a couple of months. A female with no prior knowledge that his realm even existed, let alone how their bondage traditions worked, would be put through her paces to show how well his time in the pleasure chamber with her had been spent. The many eyes who would behold this session would not only be judging his technique and control, but also his leadership. What if she failed him?

What if he failed her?


So, what do you think?

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20 comments:

  1. I like the internal dialogue and the meaning the behind the domination.

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    1. Thank you...the culture of domination in this story is heavily laced with meaning, yes.

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  2. Talk about the pressure being on! Intriguing world building that leaves me hungry for more. Great snippet.

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    1. Thanks for that! Yeah, no pressure here, heh heh. ;)

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  3. Suddenly he's insecure about his manhood prowess. Hmm. Maybe he needs one of those little blue pills. . .Outstanding snippet.

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    1. Bahaha! It's less about his physical, erm, stamina than his performance in dominance, as there had been an incident earlier in the story. But yeah, without mentioning that in the description, I can see how this might read as a Viagra ad. LOL

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  4. The backstory of what's going on here was fascinating. Excellent excerpt!

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  5. I can only imagine he's worried because Ti-Hana is not your average wild human. I love that she can affect him that way.

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    1. Very astute observation! There's nothing in the least average about these two or their relationship. Thanks for the feedback!

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  6. Performance anxiety, anyone? Nonetheless, I have no doubt he'll come through in the clinch. ;-)

    Also, I enjoyed the background about what's going on with Ti-Hana. I understand more now than I did before.

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    1. LOL! Even gods have their doubts, apparently. Thanks for coming by to offer your feedback.

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  7. Are there any tickets left? Only I would like to be one of the many eyes judging him! Delicious snippet, powerful and sexy.

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    1. muwahahaha Ah, to have the box seat next to his, eh? Thanks :)

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  8. What everyone else said, Rose. This is outstanding! The world building is fascinating. :-)I'm more than just a little intrigued right now at which direction this will go. :-)

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    1. Thank you! I'm a bit intrigued too, because I haven't quite decided how it WILL go. heh heh.

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  9. It seems as if he has a lot at stake here. I hope his wild human cooperates.

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    1. The spirit is willing, but is the flesh weak? I'm not entirely certain! Guess I'll find out next week. :)

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  10. Amazing world-building here- I'm definitely drawn into this story. There seems to be a lot of complexity and intrigue.

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