On select Sundays, I’ll post excerpts from works in progress or books in publication as part of Snippet Sunday, along with the Weekend Writing Warriors (link below).
This week’s snippet is from my brand new WIP,
(Attention: Explicit language)
The snarling wolf shifted, rising into a man with compact muscles and a hairy chest that matched the wiry brown tangles on his head. As he stood naked in front of the women, he wiped drool from his chin and laughed at Jayel.
“Oh, I remember you,” he said. “My daddy wouldn’t let me keep you as a little pet bitch for the pack.”
“And I remember you,” Jayel replied with a vicious sneer. “Enough to know exactly how much I’m going to enjoy putting a bullet in your face.”
“Tough talk, except I heard a gypsy made it so you can’t kill me or any werewolf.”
“Did you hear the part where I went to a coven and had that annoying little curse lifted?”
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“Did you heard the part where I went to a coven and had that annoying little curse lifted?” Nice last line! ("d" on "heard" was a typo, no doubt)
ReplyDeleteGood, snappy dialogue. Great atmosphere coming through the words. :-)
Happy Easter :-)
A very tense moment!
ReplyDeleteTension filled scene. I love her last line. I would love to know his response. :)
ReplyDeleteLove the tension and spark between them. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThanks for noticing the typo...the line had originally been written so that "heard" was the correct word. ::quick edit:: ;)
ReplyDeleteFantastic tension! Love that he had that 'little curse lifted'!! Things are gonna heat up! Great 8! :D
ReplyDeleteOh snap! He wasn't expecting that! Ha!Nice quick paced dialogue there.
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