Sunday, March 27, 2011

# Post # Six Sentence Sunday

Now I'm "Gorgeous"?-Six Sentence Sunday


On select Sundays I'll be sharing a six-sentence excerpt from one of my works in progress, as part of Six Sentence Sunday.

Believe it or not, I'm doing two sixes in a row from the same WiP(I know, what a shocker LOL). This is from my urban fantasy ONCE EVERY SPRING. Last week, we left off with Adam asking the woman he'd just met about her referring to him as "handsome"...

Dana folded her arms, mentally berating herself for the slip. Then again, why play coy if he was only a figment of her deluded subconscious?

“Guess if I'm going to have a mental meltdown," she said, "a gorgeous guy may as well be in the fantasy.”

His look burned into her. “Now I'm gorgeous?” 

“Yeah, well, don't let it go to your head--the last thing I need is a delusion with delusions of grandeur.”


J. Rose Allister is the author of more than twenty-five books, primarily romance and erotic romance. A former editor and submissions director, she now works as a mild-mannered hospital secretary by day, naughty writer by night. Connect with her on Twitter or Goodreads. She loves talking to people.


  1. I love that, a delusion with delusions of grandeur! Hey, if I'm going to have a delusion, I agree, it may as well have a sexy guy in it. Great six.

  2. Love the humor and spunkiness of the heroine- great one J Rose

  3. Great last line...great six lines actually :) Thanks for sharing!


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