Sunday, October 25, 2015

# #8 Sunday # Post

Raising the Stakes -Snippet Sunday

~~Warning: Adult content~~

On Sundays, I share tidbits of my works in progress as part of Weekend Warrior’s 8-Sentence Sunday.  


I'm still working on my fantasy, Bound to Her Master. Last time, Lord Stepanyan busied himself assessing the body paint on his slave, Ti-Hana, rather than tell her she's entitled to sleep with another man of her choosing as part of the double moon celebration. 
I'm skipping ahead a few paragraphs. It is time for their "audiencing", a public display of Stepanyan's Mastery. Ti-Hana is blindfolded and being led by guards to what she'd assumed would be her Master's private box seats, but it's soon apparent the entourage is headed someplace else.

At the rate they were descending, they would hit the arena floor itself before long. That thought struck her, and she sucked in a shallow breath.
They stopped again with her still standing on stairs.
“Presenting his arising lordship,” came a deep, reverberating boom over the loudspeaker. “Stepanyan of the house of Oshar, Lord of the Shogran, Destroyer of the fire beast, and Cerunnon Master, honoring the ancient tradition with a demonstration in the main arena.”
Ti-Hana's heart sped. Her Master might have mentioned their session wasn’t to be a small audiencing, but a center ring attraction where every eye in the stadium would scrutinize their every move.
There were no cheers, only silence, while she sensed Lord Stepanyan being taken into the arena first.
“Be mindful of the sounds you make from here on,” a maidservant whispered, slipping something around Ti-Hana’s neck. “Every noise will be amplified for the audience, from your words right down to a sigh.”

Surprise, Ti-Hana! Lord Stepanyan has just raised the stakes on her submissive training--and he isn't done yet.
What do you think?

About Bound to Her Master:

Single and pregnant, Maddie stumbles through a portal to a strange, exotic world ruled by gods who practice ancient traditions of  sexual slavery, bondage and Domination. And in this land where pregnant females represent the ideal of erotic beauty, Maddie has just become a prize catch. 
The last thing Stepanyan wants is a sex slave. The heir to the high seat has bigger problems, such as passing the trials of ascension and keeping his rival, Vo'Dan, from stealing his right to rule. But when they both encounter a lost human in the desert, Stepanyan jumps to claim the beauty before his nemesis can have the satisfaction. Although he has no intention of keeping her other than to rob Vo'Dan of a victory, Stepanyan must first become her Master, and she his bondage slave, in a convincing show of Dominance to avoid allegations of a wrongful claim.
Maddie knows nothing of the ancient ways, but she must learn in order to stay safe and hide Stepanyan's true motives. In return, he will offer her far more concessions than other Masters, especially the cruel and sadistic Vo'Dan.
But as Stepanyan and his female--now known as Ti-Hana--act out their roles as Master and slave, there will be unexpected consequences to their intimacy. A growing attachment to her sexy Master takes Ti-Hana for a hard ride she fears she won't recover from, and Stepanyan will undergo a change that will not only threaten his right to rule, but could forever alter a religious practice that has endured for thousands of years. 
And when Vo'Dan discovers the pair has broken the laws of slavery to pursue their passion, he will win the right to claim the female Stepanyan never wanted, but can no longer live without.

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I'm J. Rose Allister, wife, working mom, and the author of over twenty-five books. Somewhere in between one and the next, I love hanging out here on my blog and over on Twitter. Give me a comment or follow-I love chatting with people!

18 comments:

  1. This is an unusual tale. I'm completely involved. Good writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    1. Thank you for that! Always nice to have you stop by.

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  2. So am I! I can visualize everything including the world you created.
    (Nothing for me this week. Just stopping in.)

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    1. Thank you for that! Appreciate you dropping in on your week off. :)

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  3. Sounds like things just got a lot more intense. This is not a genre I typically read, but the originality of your story and your wonderful writing is sucking me in!

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    1. That's great to hear! Thanks for taking time to offer feedback when you don't even read the genre personally. I appreciate it!

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  4. This tale makes me wonder what kind of society institutionalizes voyeurism and exhibitionism. I picture it as an old culture with a well-established hierarchy.

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    1. Their traditions are indeed ancient--and immortal. Definitely not the culture-next-door!

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  5. I really like this snippet. It ends on a very tense note, and I love the "right down to a sigh" part.

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  6. Hope she can remember that advice when she needs to.

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  7. I hope she has a good memory. I'm sure the advice given to her was really something she needed to know.

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  8. Complications on top of complexity - I hope she can do whatever is required and keep them both safe. Such a fascinating story!

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  9. Wow--did you paint the scene, Rose! The tension is incredible. Nicely done! :-)

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    1. Thanks for that! The pressure's on, that's for sure!

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