It's time for Snippet Sunday! I hope you enjoy today's tidbit. And all those who comment will be entered in my $25 April drawing!
This week's snippet is from my WIP, DISCIPLINED COWBOYS, Book 6 of the LONE WOLVES OF SHAY FALLS series.
Remember last week's First Kiss? Moving on...
“Well, ain’t this just irony’s bitch?” came a
voice from the doorway.
Lana and Zane broke off the kiss as Jayson strode in, his
narrowed eyes fastened on Zane.
“You chewed my ass up one cheek and down the next
for makin’ a move on her behind your back, and now I ain't gone five minutes before
you’ve got her in bed and start kissin’ her?”
“We ain’t in bed, we’re sittin’ on a
bed,” Zane said. “And it might interest you to know that she kissed me.”
“Is that a
fact?” The teasing tone was back as he leaned closer to Lana. “Now since when did our fancy lady get so free-wheelin’ with her lips?”
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Testosterone is flooding your scene. Love triangles make for an intense read. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed your 8.
ReplyDeleteInteresting and I'm already highly anticipating whatever will happen next - terrific snippet!
ReplyDeleteThis seems very gritty and interesting. My imagination is running wild.
ReplyDeleteOops. Caught. Interesting dynamic in this. And full of tension! Nice snippet!
ReplyDeleteOh, can three play this game? I sense a menage coming on!!
ReplyDeleteMenage? Too much testosterone? Could go either way.
ReplyDeleteBusted! I love how this guy steals another guys woman and then blames her... What happened to chivalry? Sheesh.
ReplyDeleteGreat selection, can't wait to see more :)
Very well chosen snippet. It certainly grabs and holds the reader's interest - making us wonder if the "busted" is gonna turn into more tension or perhaps something else. Well done!!
ReplyDeleteLove the snappy dialogue! Great job! I couldn't help but smile when I read it.
ReplyDeleteGreat dialogue, very nicely handled. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteLove the dialogue and the dialect. Excellent way to set a scene. And a high powered scene at that! Can't wait to see what happens next!
ReplyDeleteOh my god, I love the dialogue! Particularly this line: 'You chewed my ass up one cheek and down the next'. I'm definitely gonna use that in real life someday! lol. Great work!
ReplyDeleteZane's got a point, doesn't he? LOL, nice snippet.
ReplyDeleteI love the turns of phrase in this---and the (mostly) mock jealousy is a nice touch. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet, love the character in their voices! Looking forward to reading more!
ReplyDeleteI thought it was real trouble until the reading
ReplyDeletethe teasing". :-) Good job setting the tone. :-)